Nice!
I love this contest. I may have to retry the whole contest thing later on, haha.
This song is pretty good. It's much more lively than the others I've heard, so you definitely took a different approach at it. I think this would be bumped to the next level if you would add a solo from either a saw instrument or a guitar.
This song is good, though. I honestly think you did a great job!
By the way, look out on my page for a contest I may start later on, in case you'd be interested.
thanks for the review! i'll be sure to look out for your contest.
I deny any previous notion of my possible victory.
This song is amazing in every possible way. I'm so tempted to remix it, because it's THAT GOOD.
Again. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGH. I lose the contest. Haha
Wow, this song is being hated so much!
I'm giving you a 9 because this is definitely a great song, but it could have some mixing and polyphony adjustments or additions. This is great though, as I said before. Nice stuff! Keep it up.
Not bad! A little quiet, but good.
This reminds me of a video game background song. It's original and it has a weird form of creepy dissonance. You're probably getting 0'd for that, haha, but I think it sounds good.
If you get the time, please listen to some of my stuff and review for me. I found this song because I was looking through my favorite artists list and found you. I had almost forgotten to check out your new stuff! I'm glad I didn't forget!
If you ever want to mess around with some of my songs or melodies, maybe remix them or something, this is me giving you permission.
haha, i think I will do that! let's see what happens
Great song!
This song, as I expected, was fantastic. I really don't have much else to say about it.
Ha, you are ALWAYS welcome to remix any of my stuff in any way. I have no doubt you'd do an amazing job.
I'm looking forward to more of your stuff!
Thank you so much :D
This isn't too bad.
I'm not a huge fan of the genre, but this does objectively sound good.
I would recommend making the beginning a little more complicated. The synth is somewhat hard to hear and has a good amount of scratchiness to it, so you may want to have some underlying bass synth beneath it, maybe that increases in volume, or perhaps a crescendoing guitar note, maybe a squealie. Those are just ideas.
Overall, this is fairly good. I would recommend adding a treble solo on either guitar or synth, but I understand how that may not be good for how you want the song to sound.
I'll look forward to more of your stuff.
Thank You for your opinion sharing. We have a very bad quality synth so yeh, we cant do much about that. And true, I never thought about adding anything even close to a treble in it. So much for my songwriting =P... and we thank you if you voted between 3.00 - 5.00 if not then go suck Xenogenocides cock.... (not you particularly) Were tired of people voting down everytime we get above him on the Heavy Metal leaderboard.. all he does is make okay hard rock on garage band and put shitty vocals in (SOmetimes) and calls it music, its just like anything techno.. its just computers making error noises.. its crap.
We take REAL INSTRUMENTS, record it with REAL MICROPHONES and tahts REAL MUSIC.
- Jonny
This is pretty great!
Please let me know what you used to make this. I love this song.
im glad you liked it! I used FL Studio 9.6 to make this.
I feel another year older.
I also feel like I just beat "Birthday: The Video Game."
This is really good! Haha, especially for an 18 second song. If I haven't told you already, you are always welcome to remix my stuff. No doubt, most of my stuff could use it. Haha.
There's not much to say about this, but even though it is so short, it was well mixed and composed. Great job!
Thanks very much -- I didn't expect that kind of response, haha :D
Yes, I may take a look at more of your songs in the near future, definitely some potential there...
This is pretty great!
I love the fade in that happens near the beginning. You have to tell me how exactly you did that, since I've been trying to figure it out for a long time.
I'd totally remix this song. I'm actually favoriting it on the off chance I get the time or patience to make another song this year.
Also, you're ALWAYS open to remix any song I've ever made and ever will make. MORE than open, in fact.
Again, I'll be looking for more of your stuff!
Its too easy bro use youtube, and you will learn EVERYTHING you need to know :)
I like what you've got going on here.
I decided to check out your stuff since you reviewed my newest song and my friend RetromanOMG's newest song, and I'm not disappointed that I did. When I saw the rating, I was a little afraid, but the fear was definitely not deserved.
This is a nice song. I'd say it's very calm, and if you wanted to make it a little better, you could always add an underlying harmony to go with the melody. Overall though, this is fantastic.
Thanks bro, love your music by the way!!
Age 32, Male
Joined on 11/2/09
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