Not bad! A little quiet, but good.
This reminds me of a video game background song. It's original and it has a weird form of creepy dissonance. You're probably getting 0'd for that, haha, but I think it sounds good.
If you get the time, please listen to some of my stuff and review for me. I found this song because I was looking through my favorite artists list and found you. I had almost forgotten to check out your new stuff! I'm glad I didn't forget!
If you ever want to mess around with some of my songs or melodies, maybe remix them or something, this is me giving you permission.