I decided to take a momentary hiatus
I've been rating your songs in the background but I decided to wait to listen to one of your songs after you had already made a few.
Your stuff is definitely getting a lot better. You've gotten much, much better. You have a definite sound to your music. In fact, I'm sure I'd be able to tell if a song was yours with my eyes closed.
I can't really say anything wrong with this because places where I think "well this could be better" are places where your style starts to shine like 2 seconds after.
Of course, more solos would be nice hahaha. Honestly though, even without solos (which I obviously love), this song is great. Keep it up!